Tried shading the flag too as from what I observed flags tend to have some shading in the inside to be more "wavy."
Solidarity with the people of Palestine.
In before shitstorm and any attempt to justify Israel's "self-defense. ZIONISM = FAIL LOLOLOLOLOLOL memes aren't funny anymore so no more trollface ever again.
I'm still against Israel and Zionism.
Edit Fixed her chin a bit and the shading behind her hair is a different color now. Also, good luck to the second flotilla!
Good message, I guess, but that silly-looking fox/kitsune/whatever-girl just makes it look like a joke. If you want to tackle a serious issue, this is definitely not the way to go.
Yes I did ask for a critique, you're absolutely correct. "Don't include this character" is NOT a critique.
Listen to me right now good ma'am. I know damn well that it feels like to be shut out just for even making a critique. If you were critiquing the flaws in my art such as "poor anatomy," "shading errors," "weird colors," yadda, yadda, yadda, then I would be more willing to listen. You did NOT critique any of that. You implied that she shouldn't even be in the damn drawing. If you see her as a silly character period, then yeah, I'd be willing to agree.
But no, you decided like a typical Westerner to tell people involved in the Free Palestine movement how to carry out their activism. I can tell you that SOME of my Arab friends are rather weary of white people exercising their privilege in telling non-whites how to carry out their struggle.
The fact that you said "I guess" sort of gives it away about how much you know about the situation. Critique my artistic flaws and errors if you must, but do NOT tell any of us who aren't even white (I'm half-Asian) how to carry out our activism if you can't relate to what's going on in the Middle East. That's a no-no.
First of all, I'll start with saying that I respect your opinions. I really do. I won't justify my country for whatever it does or doesn't, but I wonder if you think it is fair when Israeli civilians are getting punishment with a daily launching of rockets (sometimes, 80 rockets per a day) coming from Gaza? The conflict is between govermnets, not civilians. If you seriously think that we, the citizens of Israel (and for the matter, of Palestine) can actually do anything that will reach for a peace treaty, then you clearly have no idea what's going on in the area... and as someone who supports "no more ignorance" I'd expect you not to be so anti-Israeli... we're also people, you know, we don't walk around shooting Palestinians for fun, there's violence coming from the both sides of the border... not to mention that the Palestinian Authority no longer belongs to Israel. It isn't independent yet, but Israel no longer has an absolute control on it.
Then again, I don't want to bash you. I don't know you, never talked to you before and I have nothing against you, which is why there's no reason we'll start to argue or anything like this. Please keep this in mind.
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